Thursday, 20 April 2017

Ariel's Matilda Who told Lies, and was Burned to Death Poem

Ariel's Matilda Who told Lies, and was Burned to Death Poem

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  1. Anonymous21 April 2017 at 19:38

    Here are my comments on your poem recitation:
    Your pronunciation and articulation is quite good however a few words were not pronounced properly like Matilda so I give you 3/4
    Your rhythm, pace and fluency is not very good, sometimes you stress on words that do not need to be stressed on and your pace is slow at the beginning then fast at the end so I would give you 2/4
    Your pitch and tone are excellent as you express the emotion in different parts on the poem so I would give you 4/4
    You sometimes pause at run on sentences so for pause I would give 3/4
    Your Power is strong so I would give you 4/4
    Overall I would grade you 15/20

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