Thursday, 20 April 2017

Kwa Wei Le's Matilda poem

Matilda Who told Lies, and was Burned to Death Poemhttps://drive.google.com/a/s2017.sst.edu.sg/file/d/0B524oRsxIt0iR2Y0OFlybVVOOFU/view?usp=sharing
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous21 April 2017 at 00:05

    Hi Wei Le, I have listened to your recitation and here are my comments on it.
    Your pitch and tone are very good and I could hear them being used to convey emotions.
    You could probably work on your pronoun oration and articulation. Some words that you did not say correctly are "fire" (emphasis on the letter f is not enough) and "men"
    Sometimes you pause at run on sentences.
    Vocal power is good
    In total I would give you 16/20 :)

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  2. Anonymous21 April 2017 at 01:49

    Thanks.

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