Hi Lek Heng, after hearing your poem recitation, here is what I think of it. I would give your pronunciation 2/4 because you are generally clear but some of the end consonants are not pronounced clearly, example 'Aunt', 'throw' and 'succeeded'. I would give your rhythm, pace and fluency 3/4 because you are mainly fluent but your rhythm and pace is constant most of the time. I would give your pitch and tone 3/4 because there are some lines that are a little monotonous. Some of your pauses were unnecessary but they were generally fine. As for your power I would give you 4/4. In total I will give you 15/20.