Hi Hansen, after hearing your poem recitation, here is what I think of it. Your pronunciation is great and I would give you 3/4 but it can still be improved, and some examples are 'Aunt' and 'theatre' I would give your rhythm, pace and fluency 4/4 because your rhythm and pace is constant and you are fluent. I would give your pitch and tone 3/4 because there are some lines that are a little monotonous, but there are some lines that are said wonderfully. Most of your pauses were necessary and only a few of them were unnecessary and I will give you 3/4. Your power was good and expressed in a good manner and I will give you 4/4. In total I will give you 17/20.