The pronunciation for "fire" and "gasp" is not clear. The run on sentences has a little pause. There is no "was" in very nearly killed her. Overall, the pace is good.
The pronunciation for "gasp" is muffled. Some run on sentences were paused for sometime. The "was" was missing. Too casual and sometimes "singlish". Overall, good !
The pronunciation for "fire" and "gasp" is not clear. The run on sentences has a little pause. There is no "was" in very nearly killed her. Overall, the pace is good.
ReplyDeleteThe pronunciation for "gasp" is muffled. Some run on sentences were paused for sometime. The "was" was missing. Too casual and sometimes "singlish". Overall, good !
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