Hi Shaun, I have listened to your recitation and here are my comments on it. Your pitch and tone are good and I will give you 4/4. You could probably work on your pronunciation and articulation. Some words that you did not say clearly are the letter 't', like "Gallant, strict, aunt". I would give you 2/4. Most of the time, you pause at run-on sentences. I would give you 2/4. Vocal power is good, I would give you 4/4. Your rhythm, pace and fluency is quite good, I would give you 3/4. In total I would give you 15/20 :)
Hi Shaun, I have listened to poem recitation and here's what I think of it.... - Your pitch and tone is excellent - Your expression is good - But you need to improve on your pronunciation Overall, I think you did fairly well.
Hi Shaun, I have listened to your recitation and here are my comments on it.
ReplyDeleteYour pitch and tone are good and I will give you 4/4.
You could probably work on your pronunciation and articulation. Some words that you did not say clearly are the letter 't', like "Gallant, strict, aunt". I would give you 2/4.
Most of the time, you pause at run-on sentences. I would give you 2/4.
Vocal power is good, I would give you 4/4.
Your rhythm, pace and fluency is quite good, I would give you 3/4.
In total I would give you 15/20 :)
Hi Shaun, I have listened to poem recitation and here's what I think of it....
ReplyDelete- Your pitch and tone is excellent
- Your expression is good
- But you need to improve on your pronunciation
Overall, I think you did fairly well.